pasted onto the background,
camouflaged by transformation–
I would be a winged creature,
I would make my home in the sky.
I would look down and be amazed
at how wide I am
and how the earth is so far away
and small.
I would memorize the patches of green,
the glittering waters–
I would bathe in clouds
above and below
and not think at all,
shedding my worries
and obsessions,
the circular reasoning of fear,
like scraps of paper on the wind–
unglued, released, forgiven.
Linda at dVerse has asked us to respond to the wonderful art of Jackie Hurlbert. I used as inspiration her painting, “Bluebird’s Journey”, above.
You can see more of Jackie’s work at her website, jhurlbert.com
Beautifully done! Thank you for joining in.
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Thanks Linda.
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I love your collage and how you wrote to the prompt artwork. Your poem made me think of the P’eng bird from Chinese myth. Such a message of liberation, especially the lines at the end. ❤
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Thanks Jade. I’ll have to look for that bird.
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It’s the k’un and the p’eng, the koi fish that turns into a dragon/p’eng, from the Chuang Tzu.
https://www.danielharper.org/story14.htm
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What a wonderful story! Thanks for the link.
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You are welcome 🙂
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A dream of freedom.
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It’s always there. Thanks Ken.
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I think there is nothing better than birds to symbolize freedom… we all want to have wings.
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We do! thanks Bjorn.
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Nice description of fear as circular reasoning: “the circular reasoning of fear”
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Thanks Frank. Something we get caught in too often.
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Love the ending lines – so uplifting:
like scraps of paper on the wind–
unglued, released, forgiven.
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Thanks Grace. It’s an uplifting painting I think.
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What a wonderful expression
“unglued, released, forgiven.”
Thank you for dropping by to read mine Kerfe
Much❤🕊❤love
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Thanks Gillena.
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Wonderful interpretation of Jacquline’s art. Well written Kerfe – and great collage!
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Thanks Rob! Very inspirational art.
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Your poem soars artfully!
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Thanks Lynn!
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Wonderful interpretation in poetry and your own art. There is hope in this dream!
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Thanks Merril. (I can’t be gloomy all the time…)
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😉
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