The sky is a mist of blue ghosts rising from the sea. The sky is a blanket of sparkling light that appears suddenly as if conjured by the fading horizon. The sky is a layered curtain of shadow clouds that both disguise and reveal.
I sit without time, listening, watching. My body retreats from itself, my thoughts lose their words. I am lost, dispersed, nameless.
I become like the wind, seeking its reflection. I become like waves repeating their primal dance. I become like sand searching for the spaces between.
I float, a grain inside my eye.
I dreamt I was the moon, a sudden seizure of oceans traveling the spirals of shells. I dreamt I was a relic from the sea, worn away into a celebration of return. I became my ancestors, unburied and uncontained, released into the sanctuary of the cosmic coil.
Sarah at dVerse has given us the prosery prompt “I dreamt I was the moon”, from Alice Oswald’s “Full Moon”. I was lucky to be in North Carolina at the beach last week, where the moon was spectacular. 144 words and a few of my photos can’t even begin to capture the magic.
Lovely! The Oracle spoke, I’d say. Coils feature very prominently in what I’m writing at the moment, another little coincidence. Maybe.
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The Oracle was definitely there.
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Wherever there’s a moon she’s not far away.
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beautiful!
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Thanks Jodi–it was a magical moon.
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This is beautiful prose. I enjoyed the pictures too.
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Thanks Robbie. I’m not really a prose writer, but I enjoy the challenge of this poetic prose.
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Your use of language here is beautiful. So much great imagery, and the pictures add so much atmosphere. I love this one.
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Thanks Sarah. It was quite a moon.
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blue ghosts rising from the sea/spirals of shells. Beautiful images.
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Thanks Margaret.
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Your story made me think of that scene at the end of 2001: A Space Odyssey. Spacey!
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I like that comparison! Thanks Jade.
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🙂 YW
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“I dreamt I was the moon” to “cosmic coil” – all of that is perfect.
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Thanks Ken. It was such a magical moon, floating over the ocean. The perfect night sky week at the beach.
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