sky clouds rain and wind–
lush vortex spins, releasing
the unheld center
For Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge #103. The subject is windstorm.
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sky clouds rain and wind–
lush vortex spins, releasing
the unheld center
For Frank Tassone’s Haikai Challenge #103. The subject is windstorm.
A great description, Kerfe
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Thanks Robbie. I like the way the haiku form distills thought.
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Absolutely
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I absolutely love the colours you’ve used! They fit so well with the wind and water you describe.
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Thanks Jane. I think we’ll be seeing more and more of this weather…
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Deep and dark.
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Perfect beautiful description in words and art!
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Thanks Merril. The haiku form is good for essences I think.
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I believe the storm is smirking. It knows what’s going to happen. And wow what colors. I like the unhelpful center idea. As if it broke its chains.
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Something humans have no control over…smirking is a good reaction. I just read a story that goes inside a parrot’s mind to analyze the behavior of humans. We are pretty pathetic when it comes down to it.
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Now that story I would love to read.
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Words and art draw the reader into that center.
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Just what I hoped for! Thanks Ken.
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #7: K’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks Frank!
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Wow!! Such a mixture of gorgeous colors – it does look like the wind! Perfect pairing with your haiku!!
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Thanks Jill!
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