we do not
need revelation–
what will be
should be un
known, a mystery, like night
skies, like orbiting—
if we hold
the stars, the cosmos,
constant in
awe, we have
already seen both the be
ginning and the end
A shadorma chain for Colleen’s tanka Tuesday. The theme, picked by Sally Cronin, is the night sky.
This is lovely, a flight into space.
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Thanks Jane. A good place to go I think.
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Peaceful. We haven’t ruined it yet.
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I love your philosophical poetry, Kerfe. you always get me thinking! Excellent work. ❤
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Thanks Colleen.
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Also it puts humans on the same level as the rest of all life. Simply living it. Love this.
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Thanks Bela. Things would be better I think if we had a little better perspective on things.
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Agreed.
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I think the stars and space is very awe inspiring, Kerfe. Great use of this prompt.
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Thanks Robbie. It’s a great prompt to work with.
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To live in awe of the mysteries of life is to feel the pulse of the universe. To accept and not resist the flow of possibilities. Lovely, erupting, celestial vision. ❤
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Thanks Olga. The cosmos is a comfort in these times.
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Contemplative, leaves me wondering, very well written ❤️
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Thanks Jude. I’m glad I made you think!
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Love this…in constant see, …we’ve already seen the beginning and the end.
I like this perspective. So very much we don’t know. Nice write.
Pat
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So much indeed. Thanks Pat.
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Others, their light reaching us a million years later, have come and gone. Our part just now plays out, but we are among the many.
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We are. The past one place, the future somewhere elae.
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A lovely depiction of the theme, and lots of food for thought. Beautiful paintings, too. ❤
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Thanks Vashti.
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