what remains
hidden under flowered fields
waiting for the moon
For Frank Tassone’s #Haikai Challenge.
The moon was playing hide and seek with the clouds last night.
K.
lines that aim to be
what remains
hidden under flowered fields
waiting for the moon
For Frank Tassone’s #Haikai Challenge.
The moon was playing hide and seek with the clouds last night.
K. 
This is great
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Thanks!
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Different. I like it!
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Thanks. I was surprised I could manage the daisy stitch on paper.
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not that this has much to do with your lovely pen, but on my daily face-masked walk Monday, saw some ginormous rabbits in a yard, lounging without a care, as an alert and very interested dog on the path beyond the fence, stood quivering, staring. ~
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Teasing!
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So many things. That’s why it’s good to be able to get out in the moonlight without the glare of artificial light.
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I’m sure there is much more life about here at night in the city than the obvious rats and raccoons. But fear of human predators keeps us from fully exploring it.
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We’re our own worst enemy.
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Kerfe, your creativity never fails to amaze me. So cool. Haiku is wonderful and mysterious. And the photos, showing what you see when you look out, are appreciated.
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Thanks Jade. I saw a short film of an artist embellishing their daily enso, and decided to give it a try.
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I like the thought of rabbits and other things hidden and waiting for the moon.
Cool photos, too.
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Thanks Merril. I was happy to get a night not totally covered by clouds.
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Mysterious and timeless elements slow us down to breathe. That’s what your words and photos say to me.
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Those are beautiful shots K
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Thanks Jude. I was happy to see the moon!
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Yeah and capture it too. Night pictures are not the easiest to take
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Reblogged this on Frank J. Tassone and commented:
#Haiku Happenings #1 (5/7/20): K’s latest haiku for my current #haikai challenge!
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Thanks Frank.
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Nicely done, with the subtle hint at “flower moon.”
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Thanks Ken.
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