on the sands of time

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on the sands of time

A found poem from Longfellow’s “A Psalm of Life”, the theme suggested by Pat R. for Colleen’s Tanka Tuesday.  I’ve constructed a shadorma with the help of the Collage Oracle.

“…Lives of great men all remind us
   We can make our lives sublime,
And, departing, leave behind us
   Footprints on the sands of time…”

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be not like
time—fleeting, mournful,
pursuing
fate—within
each bivouac is a dream–
heart sailing the soul

24 thoughts on “on the sands of time

    1. Thanks Jane. The original poem is not my style at all, so it was an interesting exercise. I hope I captured a bit of the spirit of what I think he meant to say.

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