gathered in
like harmony
spilling out
like wings
like harmony
a stillness
like wings
unfolding
in stillness
each chord
unfolding
the world
each chord
filling
the world
with song
filling
the edges
with song
reaching
the edges
uncontained
reaching
the invisible
uncontained
singing
the invisible
to eternity
singing
beyond reason
to infinity
all needs
beyond reason
spilling out
all needs met
and gathered in
An unrhymed pantoum for Sue Vincent’s photo prompt, above.
K. 
This form works so well…and I love that both the painting and the words ‘spill out’ beyond their obvious boundaries.
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Thanks Sue. I love the pantoum, and the paint found its own way out.
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Absolutely lovely as always, K! ❤
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Thanks Lucy!
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Oh wow! never heard of that form, sounds lovely. Thanks for sharing this.
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Thanks. The pantoum is a favorite of mine. I like repetitive foms in general.
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Wonderful. I was swept along by the flow of words.
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Thanks Suzanne. The pantoum always pulls me along.
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Took me some time but I loved it finally 😊
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Thanks Jude. I did not mean to make you work!
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Haha, it’s okay 😊
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I love how you manage to take a linear layout and turn it into a circle.
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Thanks Jane. It seems to be the way my mind works right now.
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It’s a good, logical way. You can pick up the things you missed last time around.
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I love this–the repetition, and as Jane said linear turned into a circle. And it’s definitely something I’ve been feeling, but I haven’t quite been able to articulate–so thank you!
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Thanks Merril! That makes me good.
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I like the watercolor presentation of the scene in Sue’s photo.
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