
The Kick-About prompt this time around is “The Five Canons of Rhetoric”. My mind glazed over as I read through these rigid and formal ways of organizing communication. Of course the word rhetoric has multiple meanings, the first of which, according to dictionary.com, is “(in writing or speech) the undue use of exaggeration or display; bombast”. Something we all been oversubjected to of late.

What is true of all the definitions is that rhetoric involves the use of language. One synonym given particularly caught my eye: ” balderdash–senseless, stupid, or exaggerated talk or writing; nonsense”. The word nonsense immediately made me think of the surrealists.

The surrealists felt that letting go of the need to control your creation would reveal deeper truths. This was true of both visual and written art. They rejected logic and reason.

I often use surrealistic techniques for both my art and my writing. I’ve been doing rorschach images for awhile–these little cards are done by dripping the leftover paint from my watercolors onto the card and folding it in half. Usually the layers are done in several sessions.

I also compose comments for my images using words and phrases I’ve cut out of magazines and advertisements. I limit myself to what’s contained in one envelope for each card, and often spend quite a long time choosing and arranging them. I call it the collage box oracle, as it’s similar to using magnetic poetry. I was originally inspired by Claudia McGill, who is a master at this technique.

I’m usually surprised by what appears. It always makes me think.

I first scanned in just the images, and then worked on the words. When I went to scan them in, I realized I had changed the orientation of the image in half of them. Another unexpected surprise.

Surrealistic Rhetoric has no pretense to being anything but a random arrangement of words. But somehow it manages to incorporate at least 4 of the classical canons–invention, arrangement, style, and delivery. As to memory–well, canon #7 deals with that.
The Eight Canons of Surrealist Rhetoric
Is there anything more archetypal than nothing?
Space is just energy deconstructing.
You expected evolving to be more complex.
Adventure awaits beyond the details of yourself.
Fools rush into the shadow of the projected image.
I was invented from the earth’s fertile surfaces–
otherwise my unlimited nakedness would be alarming.
My plans are to forget to remember.
There was a window from the start—simple and mysterious–
imagine looking through it to what is hidden between.
Oh what a collection, Kerfe. You never cease to amaze me. Your mind works in mystical mysterious ways. The image for #7 looks like an other-worldly being. Maybe came through the window?
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Thanks Jade. I don’t understand where most of what I do comes from myself. But the window is always open.
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This is a masterclass in how to arrange words in an intelligently surreal/off-beat way while still making what sounds like sense. My eyes glaze over when I read stuff that doesn’t obey any rules of grammar or the meaning of the words, and leaves it all up to individual ‘interpretation’. How can you ‘interpret’ something that means nothing, not even to the person who wrote it?
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I agree. I don’t like things that are totally meaningless either. Whether planned or unplanned. Claudia is really the master of this kind of working with words.
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There’s never an extra word in her poems. Each one counts.
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absolutely love this collection, because your words came in different directions I read some differently … most inspiring!
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Thanks Kate. Reading them in different ways is also part of it!
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very clever 🙂
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Wow, that was a tour de force exposition, and I thought I couldn’t be any more in love with Surrealism! I don’t practice it nearly as much as I could… and almost anybody could say that because if more people did, I do believe the world wouldn’t be in its present state.
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Thanks Sun, I believe you are right. The need to control is rampant.
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