
Where there’s life, there hope–
your tiny hand is full of promise,
growing into luminescence,
reaching out, moving towards light.
Your tiny hand is full of promise–
it opens like the sky,
reaching out, moving towards light
like a flower awakening.
It opens like the sky,
complete and infinite–
like a flower awakening,
dancing with the wind.
Complete and infinite,
you sparkle the darkness–
dancing with the wind
like a trail of stars.
You sparkle the darkness–
a mirror, a pathway
like a trail of stars–
everything all at once.
A mirror, a pathway
growing into luminescence–
everything all at once–
where there’s life, there’s hope.

Merril at dVerse asks us to write a poem incorporating a proverb.
where there’s life, there’s hope
Beautiful, life-affirming.
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Thanks. I wanted a positive feeling for a change.
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You are so welcome.
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I 💕 this! Love how you employed form to imbue meaning into the words!
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Thanks David. I do love the way the repetition of a pantoum can play with meaning.
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Bellisima!
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Thanks!
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I love the backstitch effect that makes it impossible to undo.
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Impossible.
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A great poem of hope and truth! Babies do give us hope for the future!
Dwight
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Thanks Dwight. They do!
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:>)
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Glowing poem, Kerfe. Neat artwork also.
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Thanks Jade. We need all the hope we can find.
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You’re welcome.
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So beautiful.
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Thanks Lucy.
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An exquisite write, huge sighs from my corner of the world.
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Thanks Helen. The world is in need of hope.
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Yes, hope indeed, and “full of promise”
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Thanks Ron.
WordPress would not let me leave a comment on your post, but I especially identified with the locked door, as I’ve forgotten my keys inside on more than one occasion. But they all made me smile.
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This is so gorgeously worded, Kerfe! I especially love; “You sparkle the darkness–a mirror, a pathway
like a trail of stars–everything all at once.”💝💝
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Thanks Sanaa.
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great life-affirming pantoum, so different for you Kerfe … I totally love it!
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Thanks Kate. Am I really that depressing? Well I’m glad that at least for once I am not.
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never depressing but this is truly uplifting 🙂
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So beautiful and full of hope! The magic that a newborn brings into our lives 😊
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They do. Thanks Ingrid.
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So beautiful, and such a lovely message. Babies do bring a sense of hope.
I would have known this is a Kerfe poem anywhere. 😀
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Thanks Merril. That’s good to know!
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Beautiful. As always, I finish your pantoum before I realize there’s repetition.
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Thanks Ken. It’s good to know that repetition doesn’t overwhelm the words.
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A gorgeous poem and homage to new life, and lovely accompanying artwork. I especially liked the stanza:
“Your tiny hand is full of promise–
it opens like the sky,
reaching out, moving towards light
like a flower awakening.”
So lovely ❤
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Thanks Sunra.
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