water and air

ocean riding sky–
waves rise untethered floating
entangled in clouds

For Ingrid’s concrete poetry prompt at dVerse. Like Ingrid, I’m usually abstract with my verse, so I’m not sure even this short verse meets the requirements. I didn’t use any of the forbidden words though.

The top collage was done for a collaboration with Marcy Erb in 2015. The beach sketch, which reminds me somewhat of those in my lost sketchbook from last summer, was done in 2016.

43 thoughts on “water and air

  1. I love this tangling of waves and clouds: I think haiku is the perfect form for concrete poetry. And the two images are marvellous. The idea of the lost sketchbook lends an extra depth to the drawing.

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