
secretly you hold the cosmos
as if
it were a newborn child–
you are
overwhelmed by the sheer magnitude the latitude the longitude–
seamless
in its capacity to expand and carry
your bones
inside your body at the intersection of all dark,
all light

The prompt for NaPoWriMo Day 11 is to write a poem about a very large thing. I’ve used the waltmarie form with the subject of healing, prompt 12 from Muri’s April Scavenger hunt. I love the way this form illuminates itself with its interior verse.

I love the way the implicit stars shine through this poem, Kerfe!
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Thanks Kim. The cosmos is endlessly inspiring.
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Stunning words and a stunning collage! 🌟
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Thanks Charlotte. When I saw the prompt this morning I knew right away which collage would work.
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Beautiful work; and you’re right: this form is perfect for this poem. Salute
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Thanks Ron.
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Beautiful–I love that interior verse, and all the light shining through.
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Thanks Merril. I think the Oracle was whispering in my ear…
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She always does.
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I love this one double or maybe triple! The Waltmarie was the perfect vehicle and the poem within the poem fits the art work seamlessly!!
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Thanks Muri. I really like this form. I should use it more often.
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I’m so excited to discover a new poetic form! Love the idea of the universe as a newborn.💜
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It’s a really great form. There’s both flexibility and dimensionality to it. The universe is always being born I think and full of endless possibility.
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There’s nothing grander than the cosmos. Well done.
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Thanks Ken. No there’s not.
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This is incredible, Kerfe. Sitting with this and your last offering, amazed and dreaming.
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Thanks Sun. Your appreciation means a lot!
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I honestly don’t know how many ways I can express my appreciation for your pieces of art, Kerfe. You constantly broaden my horizons.
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Thanjs David. Redon has been my inspiration for April and he is a good one.
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You convey a celestial vastness with your words, Kerfe!
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Vast it is. Thanks Ingrid.
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Beautiful Waltmarie for the cosmos and the artwork is stunning (as usual 🙂)!
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Thanks Punam. I like this form–it’s very flexible.
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You are welcome. It is, I have not yet attempted a Waltmarie for Val.
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I think you’ll enjoy it.
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lucid and luminous, Kerfe – collage and pen both ~
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Thanks M.
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