constructing omens
out of wishes on the wind–
a crow’s silhouette
A small poem for the NaPoWriMo prompt of a very small thing.
a small poem
K.
lines that aim to be
constructing omens
out of wishes on the wind–
a crow’s silhouette
A small poem for the NaPoWriMo prompt of a very small thing.
K. 
Sometimes the fewest words say the most!
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That’s true Ingrid. Each one is important.
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I feel this one.
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Hard to escape the feeling.
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Yes.
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This is lovely, Kerfe.
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Thanks Robbie.
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A poem with an omen. Horrible news from your city, K. So sad to see. Sending love.
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Thanks Manja. It’s been weeks of gun violence here, this is just the worst. I can’t even process it any more.
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Oh, horrible. 😦 I just wish you peace.
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Thanks.
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Oh, your small poem is perfect!
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Thanks Charlotte. You can’t go wrong with crows.
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I, too, turned to haiku — small form fits and yours is lovely.
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Thanks Elizabeth. It seemed the right response to the prompt.
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Crows, wishes, the wind and omens. So much in such a tiny poem.
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The limitations of haiku definitely distills your thoughts.
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I get impatient with them, you keep calm and get it right.
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I go through a lot of words first…
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That’s why your haiku come out well. Each word is special.
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This poem is delicious!! Every line is an explosion and the art work is outstanding!!!
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Thanks Muri. Writing haiku definitely makes me focus on each word.
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Crows and omens…perfect combination! Love the haiku.
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Thanks–crows are always around!
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So they are. You are welcome.
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