
When you stand beside the ocean
resonating with each wave,
Shimmering beside the ocean
ebbing flowing with each wave,
It’s as if you’re moving with it
spiraling and uncontained.
When the moon shines in your window
and it wakes you with its light,
Near full moon shines in your window
wakes you up with silver light,
Even shadows turn to magic
and everything’s all right.
When the birds begin the morning
fill the air up with their song,
Robin cardinal and blue jay
sing the sun up with their song,
Even grey days seem to open
make you feel like you belong.
If someone should think about you
get in touch just say hello,
An old friend is thinking of you
gets in touch to let you know,
All your worries are forgotten
all those things that brought you low.
Then your mind distills and empties
leaving room for what you’re not,
All those thoughts retreat get quiet
now there’s room for what you’re not,
You can hear life’s heartbeat whisper
you give thanks for what you’ve got.

For NaPoWriMo Day 18 where the prompt is to to write your own poem that provides five answers to the same question – without ever specifically identifying the question that is being answered. and Muri’s April Scavenger Hunt where one of the prompts is to write a blues poem.


Yes! Those are the answers — the best answers. So lovely.
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Thanks Elizabeth.
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Wonderful answers and wonderful art. Those last two lines are perfect, and I love those blues that make me think of seas and rivers.
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Thanks Merril. I’ve been dreaming a lot of the sea.
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Interesting. I wonder why.
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The sea and the moon seem related to me. Maybe the influence of the moon.
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Yes, that could be.
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I can guess what your question is. It should be posted everywhere wellness gurus try to sell their wares.
I was just going to give this one a try and had an idea along similar lines.
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Thanks Jane. I’ll go take a look.
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Beautiful face of the ocean and your blues answers. And if you haven’t yet, have a look at Visual Verse…
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Manja, you are my good luck charm! Thanks!
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Amen to everything in that last stanza.💜🍃
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Thanks Romana.
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Wonderful! I love the art that you paired with this blues poem – the first one really caught my imagination!!
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Thanks Muri. I did that awhile ago. I meant to do more of them, which is true of many things in my life. (K)
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A beautiful poem of gratitude, Kerfe!
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Thanks Ingrid.
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And thankful for having had all those moments.
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Thanks Ken.
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Beautiful answers and the art so in tandem with your writing.
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That was a great prompt. Thanks.
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