
They wished to be passengers on a river of stars,
but the road they followed fell below the horizon,
a road that insisted on following darker paths.
Suddenly they found themselves accompanied by wolves.
The wolves ran through an expanding tunnel–
its walls were spattered with the past,
a past too scattered to contain or understand.
No door appeared within, no window,
no exit from the accumulations of bad intent,
the gods and humans that demanded obedience.
The wolves made no demands, but extended an invitation
to join them as they became transparent—
to join them in sheering the mind’s self-imposed limits.
They wished to be passengers on a river of stars.

A duplex sonnet for NaPoWriMo Day 27.

This reads like a wolf dream and a human nightmare. I’d run with the wolves.
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The only way to go.
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I love the art, the form, and the content of it. Follow the wolves, they know the way.
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Much wiser than humans. Thanks Jade.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
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Ah, a river of stars! I see what you mean, Kerfe! Some might consider the wolves to be dark, but I see them as free spirits. I love the idea of the walls of the expanding tunnel ‘spattered with the past’.
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Thanks Kim. I agree, wolves are good spirits to walk among.
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This is like a fairy tale. To be a passenger on a river of stars. That sounds amazing.
A saw a bird face in your top image.
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I second Merril 💜
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That’s exactly how it came to me, like a fairy tale. I myself keep seeing different things in the top image, which was meant to be a wolf moon. I like when that happens.
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That’s so cool, Kerfe!
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Wonderfully surreal!💜🍃
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Thanks Romana!
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I love this one!! The art is as usual outstanding!
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Thanks Muri.
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What a magnificent wish! I love the wolf painting.
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Thanks Ingrid. Perhaps we will find tha road…
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I hope so…
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total escapism, loving this
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Thanks Kate.
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I love the invitation to sheer our limits… And the flux of birds and wolves and stars (that Cygnus seems to be carrying me with it). I still think of the last Wolf Moon as the last time I felt really whole, but I feel the wheel gathering a more positive momentum…
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Thanks Sun. That is good news!
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You used the form so well for this almost surreal tale. Love the art.
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Thanks Punam. It’s a good form I think.
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It sure is. You are welcome.
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