multitudes of changing colour, condensed motion, thoughts full

1
we can hear the universe sing
on the edge of time–
from nothing, vast light

2
earthshine–
reflections of change and reprise
spilling from our eyes

3
a map
sweeping life away–
mountain water green

4
what was not, now is–
what holds the earth’s hand
as being collides?

5
from the inside out,
like the tides,
become somewhere else

Laura at dVerse asked us to use the last lines of our recent poems to construct a new poem of at least 12 lines. I went through all my poems both here and on memadtwo from November 1 until now, only adding one word, like, with the tides. The title is from the last line of a sijo, hence its length, as opposed to my normal preference for short lines.

33 thoughts on “multitudes of changing colour, condensed motion, thoughts full

  1. If ever a poem were “found,” Kerfe, this one certainly is! Each image/line naturally coheres, elements of the universe combining to their own internal music, and the art is just icing on the cake! Loved this. ❤️

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