a misted bridge forms
across the water–
our voices dance
as if they were winged
across the water
we float airborne
touching the sky
our voices dance
uncontained
scattering the light
as if we were winged
needing no reason
playing with life itself
For dVerse, where Lisa asks us to play. Also inspired by the photo, above, by Terri Webster Schrandt, provided by Colleen for this week’s Tanka Tuesday. I’ve written another trimeric poem.
K. 
So lovely 🤍
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Thanks Paula.
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I like how you characterize the white on the artwork and do see it mirrors the photo. Very nice bridge.
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Thanks Jade. We need those bridges.
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You’re welcome and yes!
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Wonderful springtime feeling in art and words.
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Thanks Aletha. It’s true, I’m thinking of spring.
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Your poem gave me the nostalgic feeling of laying in the grass watching clouds, imagining that I am floating away with them on the wind.
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Thanks Christine. I remember those days fondly myself!
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Your Trimeric is a delight and the art is beautiful as well!
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Thanks Muri.
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Sounds exciting and adventurous.
Thanks for dropping by my blog.
Much💜love
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Lovely trimeric! I think they work best the way you’ve formed this one, short, imagist lines that flow into one another.
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Thanks Jane. This was originally much more wordy, but you’re right, trimming it down made it better.
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It might be because I at least notice the refrain line when the poem is very spare. More words can have the effect of hiding it.
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I love the flow of your words, Kerfe. There is great sensory language and you feel the magic of the mist in your verse and in your artwork. What a compliment to the photo! 💚🍀
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Thanks Colleen. It’s a beautiful photo to work with.
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Thank goodness for Terri’s photos! 😀
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Now that is GORGEOUS!! 😍😍😍
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Thanks Sanaa!
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Absolutely lovely 💜
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Thanks Willow.
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This sounds like a very good dream
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Thanks Bjorn.
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Beautiful combination ❤
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Thanks!
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I love that feeling of flight over all this.
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Thanks Luanne.
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absolutely delightful and love the splash of colour!
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Thanks Kate.
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Such a sense of peace in this.
I agree about the short lines in the trimeric. There’s a lovely flow to this that fits the landscape and message.
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Thanks Merril. The colors in the photo are magical.
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You’re welcome. They are.
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This is so beautiful, Kerfe! You have this form mastered.
Yvette M Calleiro 🙂
http://yvettemcalliero.blogspot.com
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Thanks Yvette. It’s a new favorite.
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Such a delightful verse, Kerfe!
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Thanks Punam.
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My pleasure.
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