
the past is always mythic–
crow with its harsh trumpet voice
it’s voice splitting and grating the wind–
a story we tell ourselves–
crow with its hinged beak
incanting warnings and cryptic complaints,
embellished with the shimmer of vanished worlds–
crow with its eye like a black
crystal ball, holding secrets,
magic, shadowed with spells–
crow with its wings outstretched
like a bridge to another dimension,
unknowable in either detail or entirety,
feathers collecting the luminosity,
the reflections of both sun and moon,
scattered from different points of view–
crow with its mathematics
of rhyme and unreason,
hiding inside the deceptions of time–
its murderous gathering,
harvesting any soul caught wandering–
as if truth were actually a substance
in search of a body, a vessel,
a refuge, the place beyond all limitations
bathed in the redemption of a blinding light

Off prompt for NaPoWriMo but answering two prompts this week from dVerse, Lisa’s “menagerie”, and Laura’s contrapuntal where I’ve used the opposites scatter and collect.


“crow with its mathematics
of rhyme and unreason,”
This is intriguing, K. 🙂
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Thanks–crows have many layers I think.
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Yes they do. 🙂
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What a wonderful crow poem! Each time I thought I had my favourite image, you produced another one.
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Thanks Jane. Somehow there is always more to say about them.
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I got a crow poem yesterday, but one of the prompt images was a crow, so it wasn’t really spontaneous.
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Every morning they remind me of their presence.
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Son is trying to tame one that comes and sits on his balcony. He’s not had much success so far.
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These things take time.
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I’ve suggested he just puts food out for the crow and let the crow decide how much human contact it wants. meanwhile, he should adopt an old cat that just wants a bit of comfort and long naps.
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That’s a good idea. Crows want to control things.
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They must be laughing at him.
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Well done! I liked the line about the crow with the eyes like black crystal balls fully of magic and mystery.
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Thanks Dwight. That seems to be a favorite.
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Wonderful poetry, Kerfe and art! I like this technique!
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Thanks Colleen. It’s a good challenge!
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I’ve been editing (creating books & book covers)… you know it’s always feast or famine. I’m so far behind with the challenges.
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But you’re so far ahead with your success! I’m glad this has turned into something that keeps you very busy. But I hope you find a little time for some poems as well.
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I will. It all piled up on me for the last few weeks. I miss my poetic interludes!
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This poem really does pay tribute to the mysticism of crows. They often seem to take the role of the ‘bad bird’.
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Thanks Robbie. I like them, as you can tell.
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❤ ❤ ❤ OMG, Kerfe, one of your best and that is saying a lot. I love this poem and I'm saving it with the other special poems I've saved along the way.
Favorite parts:
the past is always mythic–
a story we tell ourselves–
crow with its eye like a black
crystal ball, holding secrets,
magic, shadowed with spells–
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Thanks Jade. What a wonderful complement! You’ve made my day.
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You’re welcome and my pleasure to read.
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Kerfe, this is so good! Amazing images and the artwork is terrific.
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Thanks Punam. Crow is a favorite of mine.
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You do roundish paintings I rather like a lot. This first especially. How to spell Rorschach, yea, like that. Third too, but kind of dangerous. AND last four lines of the poem, reach way up high – and get there. Nice.
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Thanks Neil. I’ve done lots of art based on crows–they have a lot to say.
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Well, you know how much I love crows. So many wonderful crow images, I can’t even pull out just one. I love this one, Kerfe.
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Thanks Merril. Crow always provides inspiration.
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You’re welcome, and you’re right!
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I so enjoyed this one – but the inclusion of the crow is perhaps a stroke of genius!!
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Thanks Muri. Crow is always calling my name.
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Beautifully penned. I wonder how the future crows will mythologise our shimmering vanished world?
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Thanks Paul. I am sure they will have plenty to say!
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The Crow as messenger from the spirit world is a powerful and enduring image.
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It is. Thanks Ingrid.
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