


Not only was the Oracle exceptionally cryptic this morning, I was uncertain how to punctuate her message.
how is never? how is never
like a star, like a star?
its life is finite
no she said
that cannot be
but who is this voice? but who is this voice
and why? and why
are the words broken?
I wait this one out
as if the night
could bring me
its open secrets

The birdlings are always welcome, day or night.
See what I mean about question marks. Mostly they bother me, on two levels at least. But hey, I like your new circle in a square – and – I love your birds around the globe. A lot.
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Thanks Neil. It certainly makes a difference where we put punctuation–perhaps question marks more than most. Of course there are multiple ways of questioning.
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Your orbs and poetry are amazing, Kerfe!
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Thanks Colleen. The Oracle always surprises me, and then I’m surprised again by the art I find in my archives.
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Your art is amazing. I always like your choice of colors and poems. Great connections.
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I always appreciate your support, Colleen.
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Same here, Kerfe. 💜
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We both had cross purposes, two irreconcilable ways of looking at the same thing.
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Yes, that’s exactly right.
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I just read Jane’s–it’s interesting how you both had two voices.
She seemed sort of scattered to me today, too.
I love your birdlings.
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The multiple voices must mean something.
The first word the Oracle gave me today was “wait”. I think that’s a good summary of where I am right now.
The birdlings always provide a little stability. Thanks Merril.
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You’re welcome, Kerfe.
Multiple voices, multiple poems . . .
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The birdlings made me happy. And, I love the magic of punctuation for causing mayhem and mystery!
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Thanks Claudia. I always like to see the birdlings too. That’s exactly right about punctuation–it is a force in itself.
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I love the echoes in the lines, and the coming together at the end…
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Thanks Ingrid.
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That’s so funny that you were unsure about the punctuation ~ I was thinking about just that as I was reading your piece!
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Punctuation is difficult I find–at least for me. Often the slightest change can open an entire new train of thought.
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Hi Kerfe, this is an unusual and interesting poem. Lovely pictures too.
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Thanks Robbie. Unusual for sure.
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